I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mrs Hudson.
Wednesday, 24 August 2016
the Olympic story
It all started in the ocean at 3:00 pm at Bottle Cap Bay where a mermaid was waiting for Bradlee Ashby to race with. All of a sudden a shark came and said “Little girl what are waiting for?’’ “Oh are you talking to me?’’ said The mermaid. “Yes” said the shark.“What is your name?” Rose replied. The mermaid said “Oh and I am waiting for Bradlee Ashby because we are going to race, oh and here he is.’’ “Hey Brad.’’ says Rose. “Hey Rosey poesy.’’ says Brad. “Are you ready to race?’’says Brad. “Are you?’’ replied Rose. “Rose look out behind you.’’ said Brad. “Arghhhh!’’ she screamed in pain because she was bitten on the tail and then she was pulled down to the bottom of the ocean Brad jumped into the water and then he had a tail a very strong tail. He swam after the shark and slapped him in the face and freed Rose from the sharks giant knife like jaws they went chop, chop, chop, like a razor blade. He swam to the surface on to the sand. They both have legs so Brad gets a bandage for her legs and they lived happily ever after. The End
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